Wednesday, May 11, 2011

Three Word Wednesday

"And the time came when the pain to remain tight in the bud became greater than the risk it took to blossom." - Anais Nin

Today, my creative juices were tweaked from Three Word Wednesday ...Brandish...Forbid...Manage....three words which best describe my experience last night with my young son.

Thunderstruck!
Lost in the roll,
Brandished by forbidden fear.


Manage to find peace
In the place of the witness.

7 comments:

Laurie Kolp said...

Aww... sweet!

Great job with those tough words this week.

Andy Sewina said...

That's a great place to find peace.

Well reported!

Fear Not the Darkness but What lies Within said...

wonderful use of the prompts great poem

Kim Nelson said...

Thunderstruck, indeed! Sometimes that is how important revelations arrive, isn't it? I alway appreciate poetry that evokes, provokes a bit of reflection and thought. This does.
http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/05/11/words-daggers-and-swords-petite/

jaerose said...

Finding somewhere to hide from the thunder is the most important thing..jae

honeyhaiku said...

Beautifully tender

Greyscale Territory said...

It sounds as if fear turned into a giver rather than a taker of strength! Interesting poem!