"And the time came when the pain to remain tight in the bud became greater than the risk it took to blossom." - Anais Nin
Today, my creative juices were tweaked from Three Word Wednesday ...Brandish...Forbid...Manage....three words which best describe my experience last night with my young son.
Thunderstruck!
Lost in the roll,
Brandished by forbidden fear.
Manage to find peace
In the place of the witness.
Today, my creative juices were tweaked from Three Word Wednesday ...Brandish...Forbid...Manage....three words which best describe my experience last night with my young son.
Thunderstruck!
Lost in the roll,
Brandished by forbidden fear.
Manage to find peace
In the place of the witness.
7 comments:
Aww... sweet!
Great job with those tough words this week.
That's a great place to find peace.
Well reported!
wonderful use of the prompts great poem
Thunderstruck, indeed! Sometimes that is how important revelations arrive, isn't it? I alway appreciate poetry that evokes, provokes a bit of reflection and thought. This does.
http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/05/11/words-daggers-and-swords-petite/
Finding somewhere to hide from the thunder is the most important thing..jae
Beautifully tender
It sounds as if fear turned into a giver rather than a taker of strength! Interesting poem!
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